
A perfect stranger an unknown face
Steadily invades my personal space
I stand there with my defences broken
Comprehending words this stranger had spoken
I wonder how someone so unknown
Can seem so special , like someone your own
A perfect stranger an unknown face
Steadily invades my personal space
Of both the heart and subconscious mind
A feeling so alien yet of a familiar kind...
A healing touch worth a lifelong wait-
Now slowly attends to my wounded fate
A perfect stranger an unknown face
Steadily invades my personal space
A sea of Love that inundates
Is breaking through my heart's floodgates
This joy of being complete ,so deep within
Purges me of my darkest guilt and sin
A perfect stranger an unknown face
Steadily invades my personal space
With feelings of ecstacy and sweet spasms
Of unconditional love , of unending orgasms-
My soul so stirred has impatiently waited
To become one again ,with whom it had mated.
A perfect stranger an unknown face
Steadily invades my personal space
I have now found what the heart had sought
The spring of true love to me has brought-
A harvest of feelings though not home-grown
Triggering emotions so pure, hitherto unknown.
Love is purity and sacrifice,
It sure does come for a price ,
A perfect lover ,a beautiful face,
Now adorns my heart's place...
- Mayank Gusain
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This is byfar the best poem i think i may have written...
ReplyDeleteI like the pacing of your poem. You've used an iambic tetrameter very consistently, and flows like a song with the rhyme. Bravo. =]
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Thanks a tonne dear ...felt good to know you liked it !
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